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The Wonderful View, by Doug Hulen

This is an adaptation of an inspirational anecdote which has circulated for years, the source and author are unknown. This story can give us remarkable insight into just how well our imaginations can work for us, and for others, if we will allow them to do so.

Two men, both seriously ill, occupied the same hospital room. One man was allowed to sit up in his bed for an hour each afternoon to help drain the fluid from his lungs. His bed was next to the room’s only window. The other man had to spend all his time flat on his back. The men talked for hours on end. They spoke of their wives and families, their homes, their jobs, their involvement in the military service, where they had been on vacation.

Every afternoon when the man in the bed by the window could sit up, he would pass the time by describing to his roommate all the things he could see outside the window.

The man in the other bed began to live for those one-hour periods where his world would be broadened and enlivened by all the activity and color of the world outside.

The window overlooked a park with a lovely lake. Ducks and swans played on the water while children sailed their model boats. Young lovers walked arm in arm amidst flowers of every color and a fine view of the city skyline could be seen in the distance.

As the man by the window described all this in exquisite detail, the man on the other side of the room would close his eyes and imagine the picturesque scene.

One warm afternoon the man by the window described a parade passing on the street below. Although the other man couldn’t hear the band, he could see it clearly as the old fellow by the window portrayed its every detail with the most descriptive words.

Days and weeks passed. The afternoon peeks into the outside world continued. Bright, sunny days, but rainy days too. Dark clouds rolling in and intense lightning bolts descending on the park. Pedestrians running for cover as the rain came in sheets, blown by a howling wind. It would soon be winter, they said, as they speculated as to whether or not the pond would freeze hard enough for skaters. Maybe there would be a Christmas tree on the frozen lake, and carolers too. They wondered how much snow they might get this year.

One morning, the day nurse arrived to bring water for their baths only to find the lifeless body of the man by the window, who had died peacefully in his sleep. She was saddened and called the hospital attendants to take the body away.

As soon as it seemed appropriate, the other man asked if he could be moved next to the window. The nurse was happy to make the switch, and after making sure he was comfortable, she left him alone.

Slowly, painfully, he propped himself up on one elbow to take his first look at the real world outside.

He strained to slowly turn to look out the window beside the bed.

It faced a completely blank brick wall.  

10 Responses to “The Wonderful View, by Doug Hulen”

  1. Doug Lipman says:

    About the Author

    Doug Hulen is involved in reading programs for the elderly.

    His web site about that activity includes ways you can help his project. Got any stories to submit for it?

  2. Barbara White says:

    This is a great story I loved it ! May i have permission to use it as an illustration in my seminars?
    Barb

  3. Dave Walsh says:

    Hmm this is an interesting story. I am still not fully comfortable with the “false realities” that storytelling can generate. In this story it was probably a good thing. Can anyone think of a story where the false reality turns out to be a bad thing? (storytelling misused?)

  4. Rhea Mychels says:

    Excellent. Moving.

  5. Doug Hulen says:

    I appreciate the kind comments. This story is fully in the public domain and may be used as such.

    Thanks,
    Doug

  6. Ambra Allgood says:

    The story reminds me of the film “It’s a Beautiful Life.” How do we create beauty and enchant ment in an often stark reality? To create a beautiful life we each have the responsibility to fully except the paradigm of reality we have created and find the blessings within that reality. The man sharing his imagination weaved beauty and “LIGHT” into LIFE. That is our personal power of creation and story-life. To choose a path of heart in our sharing stories, draw in the “LIGHT” of consciousness to lift up and inspire others. That would be my base line VALUE.

  7. Hannah says:

    How did you get to put your story in.

  8. Doug Lipman says:

    Reply to Hannah from Doug Lipman: Doug Hulen submitted his story as part of a contest I ran in eTips from the Storytelling Coach. I chose it as the winner of that month’s contest, for stories about imagination!

  9. kiran says:

    Hi,
    Although Doug Hulen has said that the story is fully in the public domain, I thought it proper to register that I would like to use it for a Lesson Plan, if I may. Needless to say, it is a beautiful story.

  10. Marilyn says:

    What a beautiful story! It’s left me speechless.

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